How Stops In Your Copy Can Make Your Pitch Unreadable

Hey everyone…I am working with a client who sent over some “wretched” copy for me to rewrite.

The video below talks all about it…and the #1 error you should NEVER make when writing copy.

Even I commit this sometimes…thanks to my background as a scientist.

Hope you like it!

Until next time,

Kevin Hill

“The Professor of High Response”

2 comments… add one
  • Keith Sep 7, 2011 @ 9:41

    Hello Kevin,

    Thanks a lot for this tip! It’s an easy mistake to make. Your tip also demonstrates what may work and be okay in one form of writing, may not be okay in another.

    Thanks again.

    • Kevin Sep 12, 2011 @ 17:22

      Hi Keith…glad you enjoyed the tip! Take care, Kevin

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